The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooo, I like this. Very facinating story.
Interest became intrigue as I read this entry. Creative way to tell a story. Like it very much.
The more I read, the more I liked this story. Love the lesson your MC gives the reader at the end.
Two thumbs up from me.
Love this education in history! Well done.
This is the most interesting take on blue I have seen yet. Well done!
This is amazing! I was fascinated and breathless. I felt the light of the blue as you MC did...great message!
I love the message in this story of intrigue and mystery. Well done.
Great way to tell a long tale in short story form! You were able to get amazing details into your story in just a few words.
I really liked it!Such a good lesson there.
Amazing story: full of intrigue, suspense, and beauty both physical and spiritual. I, too, "felt a novel coming on" as I read this all too brief story, and would love to see it "fleshed out."
Wonderful! You gave us so much that I feel as if I've just read a novel. Superb characterization, both of the narrator and the diamond!
I was drawn in by the opening paragraph and the remainer of the story did not disappoint. Super message, too.
Unique. I love the descriptions of the diamond. Love the ending, too. Well done.
I enjoyed reading this. I was intrigued by it that I even looked up the diamond to see if it was a real thing. Well, it felt real in your story at least.
Your story is outstanding for characterization, plot, and message. I really enjoyed it.