The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
Where to begin! The rhyme and rhythm are perfect! It flows so easily. I could feel and see this mist over Ireland. So descriptive! The application was beautiul! My favorite line... "Come wind of His Spirit! Come Word of His pow’r!" If I was a judge, this would take the ribbon! Well done!! Despair and darkness and cold make our appreciation of joy and light and warmth even greater.

10/19/09
What beautiful imagery intertwined with an encouraging message! Great job.
10/22/09
This is in a league all its own! Rises to the top in comparison like cream on new milk.
Splendid!

Mona