The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked the format of this story, it's creative & different. I could see the MCs reminiscing together, telling the story in "he said, she said" style, as father & daughter.

Nice job.
10/24/09
Very creative format! I was captivated by the dialog and the narration, and couldn't to hear Dad's side. Good job on this entry!