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Honestly I felt the goosebumps on my back when I finished reading your article. The scar and pain carried by the older ladie's memories, and yet she used that to help heal someone else. Turning the pain into helaing, like Christ. What was meant for wreckage, death...became a source of power to bless and bring someone out of darkness. Those with pain can lash out and continue to pass on the curse or hand out a cure to those in need. What a victory! Amen. The crux of salvation, one suffered for all, if we can accept.
Well done! I love the title and what the story goes on to tell about being broken and being made whole again.
Very touching.
I like the hope this story brings. Strong characterizations and the voice of the young woman were well-written.
This was very entertaining and clever. The development of the women's different characteristics was just engouh to give us a real feel for who they both were. Great example of an older woman taking the time to disciple a younger woman in a way that some would not venture to guess.