The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/09
Anyone who can use the word "domesticity" in a poem gets my vote for creativity. :) I enjoyed the "aha" moment when the identity of the neighbors was revealed. :)
10/20/09
Sweet and lovely. Can't read this entry without smiling from start to finish. Priceless.

Mona
10/21/09
awwwww! I can see this on a postcard or art print with the subject of the poem as the art. Gorgeous!
Beautiful poem--all the way through. You fooled me on the identity. Great job.