The Official Writing Challenge
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Poor Odis, poor Shellie. Good writing--I could picture everything. I'm still wondering if Odis might be a ghost dog after all.
10/20/09
I love dogs, so this got an automatic vote from me! I did find the pacing the slightest bit off-kilter. The beginning had a great, easy pace, then I got a little lost in the flurry. The ending was precious!
10/21/09
Enjoyed the story. The ending was sweet. The voice of the little girl was realistic...I have four-year-old and five-year old granddaughters.