The Official Writing Challenge
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Some strong writing makes for a gripping tale.

Afraid it doesn't incorporate the topic however.

Good writing.
Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Great writing, suspenseful and entertaining ending. As far as being on topic, you mentioned the word blue a couple of times which seemed to fit the bill to me. (In my story, that's all I did as well so I may be guilty of the same infraction.) The fact still remains you're story was well done.
There is some blue, plus the tone of the writer is very blue at thinking on his cousin.Good story.
Well written, suspenseful story. Your writing is terrific!