The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
Some strong writing makes for a gripping tale.

Afraid it doesn't incorporate the topic however.

Good writing.
10/17/09
Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Great writing, suspenseful and entertaining ending. As far as being on topic, you mentioned the word blue a couple of times which seemed to fit the bill to me. (In my story, that's all I did as well so I may be guilty of the same infraction.) The fact still remains you're story was well done.
10/21/09
There is some blue, plus the tone of the writer is very blue at thinking on his cousin.Good story.
11/19/09
Well written, suspenseful story. Your writing is terrific!