The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
Excellent use of this week's theme! This was a unique angle and entertaining to read. Well done.
10/16/09
Oh, this is such a cute and clever approach to the topic! I was reading along, curious about who all these "people" were until I realized they were crayons. Then I giggled and sort of felt embarrassed that I hadn't caught on sooner. :) Reminds me of how much I LOVED getting a new BIG box of crayons, and the names of each one were so special. What a great part of childhood!
10/17/09
This was so cute! Great use of the topic and creative way to approach it.
Somehow I missed making the acquaintance of Blizzard Blue in my crayon experience. Wish I'd known this colorful character! Very well done.
10/20/09
That was a wonderful story. It was great how you left us hanging for a couple of paragraphs before we really knew what was happening. That helps to draw in the reader.