The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
What funny questions the wife asked but the poor man lived a sad existence. So glad he finally stood up to his gripy wife and especially glad she finally changed!
10/16/09
Thank God for answered prayers and men like Derwood. Cute story.
10/19/09
This is fantastic. The whole thing is filled with little twists that don't holler at you, but whisper just loaud enough that the reader must stop and take notice. Loved the whole thing, but painting the house blue was the perfect clincher!
10/20/09
Excellent characters and clever phrases. I was just cheering for Mr. Throckmorton! The last line felt a little tacked on to me, not quite in the tone of the balance of the piece. But it certainly shouted the message! Great job on this one.