The Official Writing Challenge
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The first line made me laugh and you have to love the guy's name as well. I could feel Sky's anxiety as I read the story. Good ending.
Sweet story. I'm glad it had a happy ending!
I hung on to every word. You have a nice, easy way with a story. Loved Sky's name and am busy imagining whether this one will be a Jr. or something else catchy....
I loved your first line. It drew me into the story and let me know that is was one I wanted to read. You have wonderful description, which made this story easy to read.
I meant easy to imagine, but it was easy to read as well.
Lots of feelings going on in this one and the writer has the ability to allow the reader to experience them.
This says so much about struggles of becoming parents.A sweet story!
I enjoyed this story! Nice job.
The first half of this story really drew me in...excellent writing skills!

I thought the second half became a little bit predictable and not quite so compelling.

Great characterization of Sky Blue--a really fine MC.