The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
The first line made me laugh and you have to love the guy's name as well. I could feel Sky's anxiety as I read the story. Good ending.
Sweet story. I'm glad it had a happy ending!
I hung on to every word. You have a nice, easy way with a story. Loved Sky's name and am busy imagining whether this one will be a Jr. or something else catchy....
10/20/09
I loved your first line. It drew me into the story and let me know that is was one I wanted to read. You have wonderful description, which made this story easy to read.
10/20/09
I meant easy to imagine, but it was easy to read as well.
10/20/09
Lots of feelings going on in this one and the writer has the ability to allow the reader to experience them.
Mona
10/20/09
This says so much about struggles of becoming parents.A sweet story!
I enjoyed this story! Nice job.
10/21/09
The first half of this story really drew me in...excellent writing skills!

I thought the second half became a little bit predictable and not quite so compelling.

Great characterization of Sky Blue--a really fine MC.