The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice dialog. Your story raised questions about Vic and I'd like to know a little more about him and who died. A very nice philisophic take on blues music.
10/16/09
Nice job setting up the scene. The dialogue was believable and left me wanting to know these characters more. I'm not a blues music fan, but this little slice of life story gave me a better understanding & appreciation for why others love it.
10/22/09
I like this one... I never thought of "the blue's" in quite that way... that the music cries for you when you can't cry for yourself...