The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
Love the picture you painted with words, and the use of the oldies radio station was fantastic. I enjoyed the flow of the story, loved the illustration of the Church family.
10/16/09
nice job of keeping the theme reappearing through out the story. good dialogue, too. and thanks for letting us know how it ended for real.
10/21/09
so sad...but a good idea for cheering up Dan. Thanks for including the postscript.
10/21/09
What I enjoyed most about this entry is the communication style between the two. The banter seems real and makes me like this couple.
Mona
10/21/09
Dub, You two must be a pair! I loved the banter,and the blues woven in. Good story.
10/21/09
I love the banter between this easy-going couple...very realistic and charming.

Be careful of comma splices (I found two in the first paragraph).

Thanks for the post note--bless their hearts! That's very sweet.