The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
Right on!!! Very good- great descriptions, very real characters. love the message!
And thanks, too, for a lovely ending to a story that could have taken a decidedly different turn.
10/16/09
What a great way to show growth in character, as well a shift in values. I liked these people (and didn't like Gail!) - good job!
10/17/09
Well done. A well written story with an excellent message. I did not like Gail, either.
I almost didn't read this one because the first sentence made me feel like I was running out of breath. But the rest of the story was great. I think I knew someone like Gail. :-p