The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/09
This is gorgeous!

I especially like your use of slant rhyme, and the lovely couplet at the end...oh, and your use of vivid imagery, too! I wish I could write poems like this.

10/12/09
Great imagery. I so much want to be part of this poem. You make this scene so warm and friendly. Great job with the topic.