The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
This is simply outstanding!

It'd be great set to music...something like Stuart Townshend does. Love it!
Great poetry. A lot of effort, I'm sure, to find the perfect words without much elaboration. Nice choices.
10/09/09
I like the common thread but not a poem for the masses, to the unchurch it would be just a lot of rhyming words, I would have liked it to be more simplistic.
10/15/09
Awesome...this is a very well thought out and well written entry. Congratulations on the second place win for this level.
10/21/09
Great work and skill are evidenced in this award winning entry--congratulations.