The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Good job! I didn't figure out your twist (the POV character) at all, and then your second twist (the color-blindness) made me laugh out loud!
10/09/09
Very enjoyable read. I read almost to the end without anything making sense to me, until the last paragraph, when I thought how clever to keep me guessing. Well constructed entry.
10/11/09
Great read. It kept my interest all the way through.