The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
I felt a bit confused when I came to the end of this story. It drew me in but then was too obscure for me to feel something for your MC. The dialog moved the story along at a good pace--just craving more details at this end.
As I was reading this I could see it - like a movie - very real - very graphic ( in a good way...)
I loved it.