The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
I definitely wanted more of this...since it started with "Once upon a time...", I expected a story. The writing was interesting, so I wanted to know more about her, and perhaps the answers to some of the questions you posed. You had lots of words left over...I encourage them to use them all!
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10/10/09
Interesting.
10/10/09
Have to admit, I read it due to the title. Loved the play off of the two viewpoints--asset and liability. Not what I expected, so well done.
10/11/09
Wow!Even as an adult I still sometimes get embarrassed when I see kissing in public.