The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
A cute poem! Nice job with both rhyme and meter.

It leaves me with a question about the significance of the color, though. Is it meaningful? Ironic? I just couldn't tell.

I like the title a lot.
10/09/09
Cute poem, even without the explanation.
10/11/09
Cute poem and well-written.
10/14/09
This was an enjoyable poem. I don't think you needed the final lines, "Who would have guessed General Doolittle loved RED,
If I hadn't written what you just now read?"
I felt like they took away from the flow of the poem instead of making it better.