The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Oh, I felt so tense along with her, and annoyed at the doctor for being so terse. You made me feel everything she felt--the sign of a good piece of writing.
10/11/09
Having a background as a medic helped me to really feel a part of the story.
Very emotional story - kept me holding my breath and hoping for a good outcome.
10/14/09
Very well done...I felt the tension and stress right along with her. Glad for the happy ending!
10/14/09
This was a great story with some really tense moments. I kept wanting someone to reassure her that everything was going to be alright. I'm sure that it would be hard to be in her position.
10/14/09
Great work. The pacing kept me engaged and you provided some excellent details for "texture" to a tense story line that could have been overdone. I really enjoyed this and I hope it does well.
Whew...a happy ending! I was feeling the stress of not knowing what was going on...great job.