The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Very entertaining!

I had to read it a few times to get everything clear as to who was who and what was happening, but I think it's an "across the pond" thing--your style is just very British, as it should be!

I enjoyed this, very much.
10/10/09
I agree this required a twice read to get the point. But once gotten it is quite entertaining. Good job.
10/16/09
I got it the first time, and have to admit to laughing out loud at least a couple of times. Having had a parakeet once as a pet, I fully identified with the line about bashing a bird's brain into a mirror. And could just see the cogs turning in the old pastor's head when the bird revealed Nan's little secret at the end. Great story.