The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Awwww...very sweet and romantic.

There were a few wordy or awkward sentences, but this is really a fun story.

My daughter had a similar feeling, only with her wedding dress...she was practically drawn to it by an unseen hand.
10/09/09
I love stories with a hint of romance! :)

This is a nicely-told piece, and I enjoyed reading it!
10/14/09
I enjoyed this story. I felt, though, that at the end you were trying to wrap-up the story too quickly. Maybe that was because of word count limit concerns. Still, it was a nice story.