The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Very timely, and so glad he did the right thing!

I'd have liked to know more about these men--what officials were they? A few titles or descriptions of official trappings would make this seem less like just two guys talking. And is an important decision like that really left to just one official?

Sometimes I wish we could just go back to before...
10/11/09
Good flow of dialogue to keep the reader's interest. Sounds similar to a conversation I overheard in Washington, D.C. back in the 70's.