The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you wove fact and fiction together to make this tender story come to life. Love the message tucked inside which offers hope to all.
What an original idea! The story is intricately plotted, and you managed to fill a simple story-telling scene with tension and suspense. Well done.
Excellent! Love the father-and-son unison in the last little bit, and Mary's pounding heart. Very, very well done!
I love the interaction in this family. Excellent writing:) and nice imagination, too. It really could have happened, for sure!
My hat is off to you and your ability to write historical fiction. This scene was so believable, I could see it all unfolding as you described - everything, historically and prophetically, making sense.
I really, really liked this. I'm a fan of Biblical fiction & how it could have happened. You did a terrific job, Mari!