The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
I like how you wove fact and fiction together to make this tender story come to life. Love the message tucked inside which offers hope to all.
10/09/09
What an original idea! The story is intricately plotted, and you managed to fill a simple story-telling scene with tension and suspense. Well done.
10/12/09
Excellent! Love the father-and-son unison in the last little bit, and Mary's pounding heart. Very, very well done!
10/14/09
I love the interaction in this family. Excellent writing:) and nice imagination, too. It really could have happened, for sure!
My hat is off to you and your ability to write historical fiction. This scene was so believable, I could see it all unfolding as you described - everything, historically and prophetically, making sense.
I really, really liked this. I'm a fan of Biblical fiction & how it could have happened. You did a terrific job, Mari!