The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Well crafted and written. As a middle school teacher, I can account for the reality of your grammatical errors. Unfortunately, I know the plot itself is just as real. Powerful writing.
10/08/09
This feels very real. I like the format - very creative. Well done.
10/09/09
Sadly, this story depicts a real and scary problem that many parents today are facing with their kids. You took a tough subject and creatively educated your reader about "cutting"--a real concern with today's troubled teens.
10/09/09
Ok, wow. Intense. I kept forgetting I was reading a challenge entry - the voice is eerily accurate. Scary stuff.
10/10/09
This was incredibly powerful. Sadly, this topic is so relevant to today's world. Oh, if she could only see that Jesus shed His precious blood FOR her!
10/12/09
Perfect--voice, content, and expecially the kicker. This should be distributed to hundreds of youth groups for discussion. VERY strong entry!
10/13/09
Powerful.
10/14/09
This is a powerful piece. Sadly, it's a true to life piece as well. I cringed when I read Thursday.