The Official Writing Challenge
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Well crafted and written. As a middle school teacher, I can account for the reality of your grammatical errors. Unfortunately, I know the plot itself is just as real. Powerful writing.
This feels very real. I like the format - very creative. Well done.
Sadly, this story depicts a real and scary problem that many parents today are facing with their kids. You took a tough subject and creatively educated your reader about "cutting"--a real concern with today's troubled teens.
Ok, wow. Intense. I kept forgetting I was reading a challenge entry - the voice is eerily accurate. Scary stuff.
This was incredibly powerful. Sadly, this topic is so relevant to today's world. Oh, if she could only see that Jesus shed His precious blood FOR her!
Perfect--voice, content, and expecially the kicker. This should be distributed to hundreds of youth groups for discussion. VERY strong entry!
This is a powerful piece. Sadly, it's a true to life piece as well. I cringed when I read Thursday.