The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
So funny! Love the voice, and the image of the lady's mishap in the garden--really fun.

Two things: I'd have picked a different title, especially for this audience, since your title is so closely associated with a well-known hymn. And the topic wasn't really integral to the story.

Top-notch writing, and a hilarious and delightful story.
10/11/09
Yes, the title had me expecting something else, but then it was a wonderful surprise. GREAT story telling and I loved the humor. I agree with your thoughts about loving the person but not having to like what they do or say.