The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Good progression! I like the way you gave hints along the way and compared it to Christ's sacrifice.
10/09/09
Perfect title for this piece--it grabbed me from the first sentence and held me to the last. Your descriptive phrases and the flow of this story made it a very interesting read. Great job.
10/09/09
Some really great details and emotions in here, it keeps you reading to see where the story is going and why. I loved it. Thought it was awesome.
10/13/09
Amy, this is outstanding! Those last few paragraphs--VERY gripping!
Excellent descriptions of what your MC recalls.
Unique interpretation of the topic as well. Thumbs up.
10/13/09
Wow. Love your ending.
10/13/09
Tremendous "feel" to this. Gripping story.






























Wow.
Wonderful and gripping the the conclusion could not have been more perfect. Outstanding!
10/15/09
Very intense :) Had me wondering "Why?"
10/15/09
Very well written Amy! I like that the main character at least was able to know that he gave his life for her. You always bring out the emotion so well that makes the story come alive.