The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
I love the idea of God guiding the surgeon's hands. My only problem was with the title, and the line in the story that matches it; a "bad day" seems hardly adequate for a shooter with multiple victims, and that made this seem a bit too unrealistic.

Your character is marvelous, and your writing is flawlwss. Well done!
I agree. And I really enjoyed this story -kept me intrigued. Plus it is truly great Christian writing that is able to challenge a reader spiritually! Well done! I ESPECIALLY loved her saying "His blood for yours" - powerful!
10/08/09
Thought this was a very good piece. Well written and sequence of story events flowed beautifully. Loved the ending and message to readers of God's mercy and grace.
10/09/09
Excellent salvation-type story. The only thing that diminished the story for me was the man's words, "I'm not a bad man." At that moment, yes, he was.
10/10/09
Very good writing, the story was a good one, in parts not very believeable but it is a story of hope.