The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Rhyme and meter hit the mark in this poem, as does the topic. Good work.
10/08/09
Oh the consequences. They don't leave us do they?
Great way of covering this very true, delicate truth.

Mona
So many levels of red here. Nicely done
10/14/09
I am so glad for forgiveness but you're right - it is hard for us to forget what we've done. We are truly blessed.
10/14/09
You have a well-written poem that flows wonderfully.