The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
You wove the topic creatively into this entry as you touched on a variety of Biblical passages. I enjoyed reading this.
What an amazing and very creative story. You held my attention all the way, wondering how it would end. Excellent writing!
10/16/09
I loved this very creative entry. I was also hanging on to every word waiting to see where the story would lead me. It led to a very satisfying end. congratulations on your Highly commended status, and your EC. Well deserved.
10/19/09
Wow..interesting POV. Great story!
10/20/09
Wonderful weaving path through various Biblical accounts. I love alternate POVs that really put the reader there and this piece did not disappoint. Great Job my friend.