The Official Writing Challenge
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I appreciate your use here of words that really match the scene but that not everyone would think to use; eg spewed rather than wept, sepulcher than tomb etc
Nicely put together in a sweet poetic voice. Very Nice!
10/09/09
Those last four lines were astonishing, and so creative!

This is a very good poem--maybe a few kinks in irregular meter to work out.

I enjoyed this very much.
10/09/09
I can see how your "wondering days" allowed you to reflect and be guided back to Calvary. What a beautiful way to tell the story we've heard many times. However, "The Union" of Mary's tears and Jesus' blood is something I will now be able to reflect on even more.