The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
Nice work with the theme. I like your free verse.
10/09/09
This is just wonderful! So many great images and phrases! One of my favorites so far.
10/13/09
Your imagery is beautiful. Love this entry in every way.
10/14/09
This is lovely. So many images to like. Well done.
10/14/09
I was salivating and I don't even like cherry pie. Great entry:)
10/14/09
Exceptional work. Though not my favored genre, it definitely engaged my attention throughout.
10/14/09
Nicely done, indeed. A joy to read and savor.
10/14/09
Wow! This is gorgeous poetry--thought and word. You excelled!
10/14/09
Lovely pictures presented here, marking the graceful passing of time. Loved the "red ribbon" line introducing each stanza (perhaps "Red Ribbon" might have made a better title?) Good job.
10/14/09
Absolutely lovely and breath taking.
10/15/09
Congratulations on your HC! Well deserved, wonderful poem.
10/15/09
So well-deserved, Jim. The subject you chose is just so creative and add to that the warmth with which only you can touch a subject...and it's just excellent.

Mona
10/21/09
Beautiful imagery in this well written entry--congrats on the HC.