The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
Nice work with the theme. I like your free verse.
10/09/09
This is just wonderful! So many great images and phrases! One of my favorites so far.
Your imagery is beautiful. Love this entry in every way.
This is lovely. So many images to like. Well done.
10/14/09
I was salivating and I don't even like cherry pie. Great entry:)
10/14/09
Exceptional work. Though not my favored genre, it definitely engaged my attention throughout.
Nicely done, indeed. A joy to read and savor.
Wow! This is gorgeous poetry--thought and word. You excelled!
10/14/09
Lovely pictures presented here, marking the graceful passing of time. Loved the "red ribbon" line introducing each stanza (perhaps "Red Ribbon" might have made a better title?) Good job.
Absolutely lovely and breath taking.
10/15/09
Congratulations on your HC! Well deserved, wonderful poem.
10/15/09
So well-deserved, Jim. The subject you chose is just so creative and add to that the warmth with which only you can touch a subject...and it's just excellent.

Mona
10/21/09
Beautiful imagery in this well written entry--congrats on the HC.