The Official Writing Challenge
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Great entry. Powerful descriptive imagery. Most importantly, the writer offers a societal commentary worth reading wrapped in a thoughtful spiritual truth. Loved it!
10/08/09
Wow! Loved the title and how you handled this. Nicely done.
10/08/09
This story targets what is going on in the world today--so many people ignoring the Truth in favor of their own selfish agendas. It scares me to think what's in store for future generations if we don't wake up!
Powerful!
Very interesting story, with a unique twist. Good job.
10/09/09
Hmmm, last night at Bible Study a friend looked me in the eye and said; "if you KNEW we only had four more years... would you feel more compelled to share Jesus with others?" Then today I read this... Might the Lord be speaking a sense of urgency to my heart? I pray the answer is yes and I pray He continue to do so. Thanks for this story!
This was a totally unique take on this week's topic, and I loved how well crafted it was. The word usage and the descriptions made me feel like I was slogging along in the muck and the mire.

I totally can see the topic in this piece, but I am not sure how on topic it will be to the judges seeing as though you only briefly mention the red blood in bold letters at the ending.

Regardless, I enjoyed this piece, and I thank you for sharing it with all of us.