The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Beautiful poem: a great message, and the rhythm flowed nicely. I really like this one.
10/09/09
There is so much that can be said in poetic form and you do it very well. I find the poem very unique.
10/09/09
Really good poem!

I found the words in all caps just a tad distracting, but that's probably just me.

I love poetry that says so much in an economy of words.
10/10/09
Interesting, rather confusing in parts, I would expect more.