The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story! Neat format. Loved the ending. Good job!
Loved the format of your story. Made me want to read more. And I hope mama learned to pick her battles more carefully.
Sweet story that I really enjoyed...So many important issues that are written about in a wonderful soft caring voice. Nice job!
Very sweet--I enjoyed seeing this character grow, and to see the changing nature of her relationships. Nice job.
Good story. The title caught my eye. I enjoyed the idea of reading a diary. It wasn't too wordy either. Well done.
I liked reading this article. My only concern is that the writing style doesn't always seem to fit with the age of Sarah. At 10, she seemed to write a little older, and at almost 14, I felt like she wrote a little young for age. Of course, I might be the only one that feels this way, though. Overall, though, I defiantely enjoyed reading this article.
Yes, a very sweet story of diary keeping. Loved its simplicity and it was an enjoyable read. Thank you - Colin
Very nice story. Nicely done. Good job.
Teresa, I'm going to feature this clever story on the Front Pages showcase for the week of September 20. Look for it on the Faithwriters Home page--and congratulations!