The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
What a clever mind you have! Enjoyable.
10/10/09
Great playing of the characters off each other. Nice subtlety in revealing the true underlying character of each one, too. Enjoyed the word play. Reminded me of the nonsense rhymes I learned as a kid, but children today don't seem to know.
So creative. I love Emily's schoolmarm demeanor.

I chuckled aloud a few times. Kudos.
I felt like I was five years old again and beginning to learn to read, only this time by animals. :)

Thanks for sharing this. It was a very clever take on this week's topic.
10/14/09
Really enjoyed this clever play on words. But I loved the animal involvement, coming from a farming area and being a retired livestock market manager whose market accommodated cattle, sheep and pigs and an occasional goat and horse etc. etc.
Thanks - Colin
I love creativity with words--I love this story!