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09/17/09
Is fun to see how children can reveal truths to us. Very good story.
09/19/09
An excellent attention-grabbing opening line.
09/19/09
It always warms my heart when God uses children as His messengers. Nice read.
Wow! I can relate to this. I, too have a precious granddaughter who daily delights and opens my eyes to fresh wonders seen through the eyes of a little child. Every old person should have a child in thie life.
09/19/09
I love the layers of meaning in this story. It captured my heart - and my attention - all the way to the beautiful ending.
09/21/09
I like many of your word choices and phrases in this. I could see the excitment of the child as they waited. :)