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09/17/09
Loved the humor in this piece. Glad the ladies were able to laugh at their new life situation. Good work.
09/19/09
I can picture these ladies and want to join them. Loved the way you wrapped this up with a bit of humor provided by Jody. A fun read.
09/19/09
Now THIS is the way to look at the empty nest! Love these ladies' attitudes. And ending is a hoot. :)
09/19/09
That's a great twist at the end!
09/21/09
I loved the misunderstandings in this cleverly written story. Your twist ending is superb!
09/23/09
I really enjoyed the ending. They might not need a support group to deal with their children leaving home, but they definately need one to deal with a husband at home all the time. That was a funny ending.