The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
Interesting, not sure by the end the anxiety Frank felt at the beginning had been resolved. Overall writing was good but try tying up a few loose ends.
09/25/09
This is a sad entry because it sounds as if your MC truly feels his life had no purpose. It would be sad indeed to spend that many years working somewhere just to wonder what good it ever was.