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09/17/09
What a great love story. And the verse you found to use was perfect. So glad the woman's attitude was changed. She was greatly rewarded!
09/18/09
Nice reminder that an empty nest does come with benefits.
09/19/09
Age is just a state of mind--so glad Doris was able to engage a new attitude after listening to the young mother. God can even use an overheard brief conversation to change our lives.
09/19/09
I'm glad Doris discovered one of the joys of an empty-next. ;)
09/21/09
You had me smiling with this story. Love your title!
09/23/09
Fantastic title! What a wonderful progression of your MC's attitude, capped with a great ending. I loved the line, "Pictures of toddlers turning into men and women mocked her from the hallway wall." Great stuff!