The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Awwww, this was bittersweet. Very creative.
Really liked this...kept my attention throughout!
09/17/09
I like story poems. Nice story! You must get some special grace being past the beginners. This is the kind of writing I do and have taken a lot of flack for not having the same syllable count consistently throughout the poem. Even so, your story and rhyming were GREAT!
09/18/09
This one started out good and then ran out of steam right around the sixth stanza, but overall good.
09/21/09
The "I adore" statement about kids movies was great. Nice pace and a revealing poem many will relate to.
09/25/09
i liked this very much...especially your references to cereal and movies...you sound a lot like me...lol.
09/26/09
Anita, I loved it. Great humor used to describe what could well be an underlying sadness.
10/14/09
good job.