The Official Writing Challenge
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Hello, friend! I've already read this once before, but enjoyed seeing it here "for real." :-)

Good job and well done!
08/19/05
I think you've discovered your gift, Darlene. Drama seems to be your forte. I enjoy reading them each week. This one was wonderful - great reflective dialogue. I had no problem picturing this sketch in front of church. Excellent take on "sightseeing" too - Peter did take in the most amazing sight of all, didn't he? Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
08/19/05
Excellent work! I always like to imagine the thoughts of those in the Bible. The 'was' words bothered me but I think it's ok when it'a a dialogue. Great Job!
08/19/05
Very, very nice capture of Peter's voice. I'd love to see this performed. I even appreciate the stage directions; they contribute to the success of this monologue.
08/19/05
Nicely done, I can see this used at a Good Friday/Sunrise service.
08/20/05
Very nice! A good actor could bring chills with this - much depth of emotion. Good insight. Thanks!
08/20/05
My favorite line: "When He opened His mouth to speak, it was as if He opened the gates of heaven and was giving a guided tour." I agree with Lynda - you have a gift. I pray God will use these dramas to minister to multitudes.
08/20/05
Darlene, I've never read a challenge entry like this before! It's neat and unique!