The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
I find the dialogue funny. I'm just glad this is an adults only site.
09/19/09
At the risk of sounding prudish, I feel this story pushed the envelope a bit too far for the Christian genre. I don't understand why being naked in one's front yard in broad daylight would honor God.
09/20/09
Well now, this was out-of-the-box but maybe a little bit too much. I don't think swearing on a Christian site is a appropriate and now I know more than I ever want to know about this couple. Your underlying story is so true but how you went about it is way too much for FW, in my opinion.
09/20/09
Weeeellll... you certainly are very clever, and your writing skills are excellent. :)