The Official Writing Challenge
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I find the dialogue funny. I'm just glad this is an adults only site.
At the risk of sounding prudish, I feel this story pushed the envelope a bit too far for the Christian genre. I don't understand why being naked in one's front yard in broad daylight would honor God.
Well now, this was out-of-the-box but maybe a little bit too much. I don't think swearing on a Christian site is a appropriate and now I know more than I ever want to know about this couple. Your underlying story is so true but how you went about it is way too much for FW, in my opinion.
Weeeellll... you certainly are very clever, and your writing skills are excellent. :)