The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/09
I like the double meaning of your title. This was poignant and with a good message/warning. Nice work.
09/21/09
Not very original, have read similiar stories a million times, could tell what the next line would be. I agree with the previous commenter that double meaning of the title was nice.
09/24/09
You painted a vivid word picture of long-suffering "Grace" and of love covering a multitude of sins...a well-written piece that I enjoyed reading very much!
~Cathy~
You painted a wonderful picture of true love and grace and it was a blessing for me to read and I thank you for writing it...!
09/26/09
Lisa, isn't it wonderful that our heavenly Father is a God of 2nd, 3rd, 4th, etc. chances? However, it's too bad when we miss out on so much of the good God would want us to have because of poor choices.