The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
Although I don't believe Santa really exists, there is one elderly gentleman with a white beard in our small town that makes it a point every year around Christmas to do some special things for kids...come to think of it... could he be...
09/18/09
I enjoyed the humbleness of this piece--made me wish for simpler and gentler times.
You pictured Old Santa just like I see him in my mind, and I liked the description, as well as the story to demonstrate his caring nature.I'm thinking he won't retire soon!
09/20/09
Aw... I enjoyed your creativity in your take on this topic and in the writing itself. Nicely done! This made me smile.
09/23/09
Although I have read several pieces (and seen a few movies) about Santa wanting to retire, I think you gave your piece a different touch. I like the route you took.