The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful story reflecting the true heart of Jesus! Thanks for the submission.
This really touched my heart. I finished with the hope that his eyes would see, and his sprit would also "see" the Truth. Well done.
A very touching article.
Well written.
An awesome story - one of my favorites this week!
I loved the ending of this story - you didn't subsribe to the quick-fix resolution where everything is neatly tied up in two sentences. Instead, you sustained credibility and yet still offered the promise of hope to come. A great read.
Awesome work! I like the reality of the ending and the feeling of hope. We all need to press on and be there when our lost loved ones wake up! Blessings, Cheri
Good job, Linda! What an interesting take on 'sightseeing' - both the physical sight and the spiritual sight, along with just a little glimpse for the reader into another culture and land.

Congratulations on your win!
Okay, where was I during this week? This is wonderful in every way! Believable and unforgettable - a great witnessing tool!
Wow - what a good story this is. I read it now, after I read Part 2 - and I'm glad I took the time. You have a good writing talent and I will continue to read your works. Thanks.