The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/05
Wonderful story reflecting the true heart of Jesus! Thanks for the submission.
This really touched my heart. I finished with the hope that his eyes would see, and his sprit would also "see" the Truth. Well done.
08/19/05
A very touching article.
Well written.
08/19/05
An awesome story - one of my favorites this week!
I loved the ending of this story - you didn't subsribe to the quick-fix resolution where everything is neatly tied up in two sentences. Instead, you sustained credibility and yet still offered the promise of hope to come. A great read.
08/22/05
Awesome work! I like the reality of the ending and the feeling of hope. We all need to press on and be there when our lost loved ones wake up! Blessings, Cheri
08/25/05
Good job, Linda! What an interesting take on 'sightseeing' - both the physical sight and the spiritual sight, along with just a little glimpse for the reader into another culture and land.

Congratulations on your win!
04/16/06
Okay, where was I during this week? This is wonderful in every way! Believable and unforgettable - a great witnessing tool!
04/19/06
Wow - what a good story this is. I read it now, after I read Part 2 - and I'm glad I took the time. You have a good writing talent and I will continue to read your works. Thanks.