The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
I had to laugh at your title, so clever. You have retirement priorities figured out. There is a lot to think about in this!
Beautiful! I'm going to hang this on my refrigerator!
09/18/09
Lots of love woven in the "giving" in this poem. It reads almost like a creed for retirees. So much purpose stated within so few words--and I enjoyed this from start to finish. My hat is off to you--and it's not red.
09/18/09
Another great bottom line. I very much like the way you dealt with the subject.
09/19/09
Some very positive sentiments. For the life of me, mind, I don't know what the colour purple is meant to represent!