The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/09
Cute and fun. A little less dialog and more "showing" may have added a bit more interest, but I enjoyed your sweet and fun granny.
09/22/09
Good job and lesson too.
09/25/09
Good story. Good analogy. Can't wait 'til this Gammaw can ride bikes with my own little Tyler.