The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/09
I could picture these lines, "The sounds that only a house like this
can produce with pedigree..." :) I lived in a house like that once. :) You've got me in the mood for celebrating Christmas with family. Congrats on 14 grandchildren!
09/22/09
I think this would have worked better as a "telling" rather than in prose. But that's just one opinion.
09/23/09
I like the personification of the house as the MC... no telling the stories there would be if the walls could talk.
09/25/09
Thank you for your note... (I tried to send you an email.. it wouldn't go through)..
09/25/09
Thank you for your kind words for my entry, "Finding Grace."