The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
A unique take on the challenge topic. This piece gave me something to think about. I'm glad God won't ever retire, though.
What a great idea!!!!!! love it!!!
I enjoyed this creative writing on topic. The last stanza is my favorite. Great job!
09/21/09
Sometimes I picture God throwing His hands in the air out of disgust for the way mankind has turned away from Him. But retire--that's just too scary and I'm grateful that's one thing I don't need to worry about.
09/22/09
Liked this one, the flow was very good. Good job.
09/23/09
Thank you for a thought provoking poem...so thankful retirement is not in God's vocabulary.
09/25/09
Congratulations on placing in the top three.
09/26/09
Great piece. I can really identify with your stanza on god as a golfer. My house is just on the other side of the 3rd putting green of a golf course and occasionally a golf ball winds up just a few feet from the house, which takes quite a hard swing.